Dear frank88maurice,
My apologies but I had a partial rethink over yr OP after a little wandering around the net. Below are some more comments / proposed policy based on my comparison of interpretations in various documents. IMO there is no method which fits every situation (everybody?) so i only suggest below content as an alternative to yr structure.
I particularly liked the IT presentation in this link –
http://www.bizmanual...procedures.html
However this extract suggests that in the real world, considerable flexibility of format is acceptable depending on individual criteria, eg the expected degree of direct usability of the policy statement -
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Accordingly my tentative summary, in very crude fashion, is that a "policy" seems to minimally (but maybe depending on situation) require some, or all, of –
1. A presence / style of an explanation / purpose / principle of the policy, (eg mission statement type policy in above link)
2. A presence of an intended target / receiver (eg employee rules type policy in above link)
3. A degree of overlap / cross-reference to a subsequent procedure (which will normally exist?).The degree is open to debate.
Regarding BRC6 itself and the OP's specific 4.9.2.1, the standard seems to demand a policy which includes chunks of (what IMO could equally be reserved for) any subsequent procedure. So be it.
BRC's glossary defines "procedure" but not "policy". Typical! But presumably also leaves the user’s options open.
My suggestion is -
Policy for Sharp Metal Instruments
Control procedures are implemented to minimise the risk of any harmful metallic contamination due sharp instruments being present in the end-product and reaching the final consumer.
Sources / risks of possible metal contamination and their appropriate preventative control are detailed in the haccp system. Specific items assessed include knives, cutting blades on equipment, needles and wires.
A record of inspection for damage and the investigation of any lost items is included.
Snap-off blade knives are not used.
Details of implementation of preventative control methods are given in procedures TSOP 001,etc and associated documents.
My comments on yr Policy –
Needs an introductory “purpose”.
IMO the majority of yr No.1 is really “procedure” although it could relate to an “employee’ type policy but that seems not very applicable in this case (?).
IMO yr no.2 is not strictly relevant to the “policy” as stated in the standard’s 4.9.2.1 (although it would be relevant to a global "metal contamination control policy").
Regardless, and particularly as per attachment above, I daresay you / some other users will substantially disagree my opinion. No problem at all.
Any alternative suggestions no doubt welcome to the OPoster.
Rgds / Charles.C
PS - it seems conventional to use future tense in policy statements. i occasionally found this rather clumsy so i considered it justifiable to avoid it as per earlier attachment.