To add to this lively discussion: the easiest way to avoid stagnant water (see above, post by rondaldb) from dead pipe systems getting into food production is to draw water that is to be used in food production as close to the municipal mains as possible. This means that a direct supply pipe without any other drawing points or cross-connections should run from the earliest possible drawing point after the municipal pipe exchange to the food production line. Downstream water should then be used for housekeeping (e.g. cleaning, hand washing, flushing toilets, etc in the order of food safety relevance). I like the fact that you have vacuum-breaker valves installed that prevent backflow of potentially contaminated water into the system.
In your Water Quality Program, I am missing mentioning of the fact that the two water systems (well water for cooling, city water for production) are physically separated and drawing points that serve well water either do not exist in food preparation areas or are clearly marked as not to be used for food preparation. In my opinion, it is irrelevant if your well water is potable if it is only used to condensate refrigerant (heat exchange) without food contact and I would not include the well water under the heading of potable water at all, unless you plan to use it (or are actually using it) in food production. This could simplify matters considerably and avoid misunderstandings.
As far as corrective action is concerned, there are a number of possible actions to take: (a) treatment of municipal or well water on site (chlorination, UV) if municipal supply is not safe, (b) shut-off of municipal supply if found unsafe. In both cases, subsequent product testing would be necessary to establish safety of produce and product withdrawal or recall might be indicated.
To avoid production downtime, a contingency supply should be identified in case of the public water supplies becoming unsafe. Your well might give you an advantage here. Regular (minimum monthly, better weekly) microbiological and chemical monitoring and adequate treatment is needed if you want to use your well as a backup supply of potable water.
Also, I agree with Charles.C, water can become unsafe through chemical contamination as well as biological contamination. Your Programme makes no reference to this. In Europe, it is generally acceptable to rely on public water analysis and regard the municipal supply as being safe, but in case of an incident, the buck still stops with the food business operator, so regular in-house testing is always advisable.
I would query your limits for total coliforms and faecal coliforms at <10. I would expect these to be <1 for drinking water.